Tight words and an ending

James James James & the Ice-tree Charcoal is coming along nicely. A rough skeleton of the ending is forming in my mind, but it's faint still. The plan is to discovery write as much as I can in the next few days. Then with the last three or four days of June I can rewrite a few times to get everything right.

The Elements of Style by Strunk and White is fantastic. Reading just the introduction inspired me to write tighter. It will take time.

Progress:

James James James short story 1,744 words and a hint of an ending in my head